| Ag-Toss | | |
| here's my second map!! |
| Capn Awesom | | |
| Not enough money for a map of that size. After the nat, there is no nearby expo for a while. Also try to give the paths more purpose instead of them just being there. |
| manbearpig | | |
it might be just me but i think it looks like it would be really easy to contain at that tiny choke after the nat and main
and i agree that a third is rather far away
modified by manbearpig |
| Ag-Toss | | |
@Capn Awesom: the mains are 2000 min
@manbearpig: u need to get air to reach to the 11-ish and 5-ish base |
| manbearpig | | |
| I never said anything about them being islands just that any real third base seems rather far and about that tiny choke after main and nat being easy to set up a contain with |
| Ag-Toss | | |
| *modifying the map now* |
| SiaBBo | | |
Yeah, and don't make paths like this. That long. You should look some promaps how they are there.
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| LasTCursE | | |
| 3rd gas too far.. distance too long.. space not used well.... a little bit better than the last one :) |
| JungleTerrain | | |
2000 min in main?
-It doesn't help to be 2 base for a long time, zerg has disadvantage without 3rd gas
-The distance between expos is pretty ridiculous, you might as well stay 2 base, but then that's... uh... not good... or whatever...XD
-Mid too big = Terran get super flanked = Terran get pwnt = Terran "gg"
Most of this should be self evident.
Take all of this as constructive criticism, and keep working at it! |
| Ag-Toss | | |
| I just need fat ramps for ash then I am good |
| Ag-Toss | | |
| Guys, i need more comments or changes cuz I will only master ash map =P, or try others later |
| Capn Awesom | | |
| lol, Ash isn't the best terrain to master, it's very bland and typically boring. But look at some pro maps to help you. They will provide a basic format to follow. |
| Manbearpig | | |
| i think it would be possible to erase that little line of cliff below / above the main and mabey add a min only there for a closer third or somewhere else around that area |
| Ag-Toss | | |
| another version coming up!! I hope I finish it in time for MOTY 2008 |
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