LML | | |
hm. I must try to make the left bridge fater in the middle, it's too narrow, currently. modified by LML |
RaDiX | | |
ok I don't want to flame, but it's a noob map. Wont eves say the reasons, I hope you'd understand them urself |
RaDiX | | |
though I've seen a lot worse from you.
I just noticed it aint so bad, but not good either ^^ |
LML | | |
well, I think that the use of the middle is the noobie thing in here. I must try to find something better to do with it, than those bridges >_< |
spinesheath | | |
Yep, that's about it. The whole middle is conceptless and just bad. |
LML | | |
ya, I will find something to do with it, but I must think about it.
in the theory it was alot better, but on the map it rly suxx :/ modified by LML |
ProTosS4EveR | | |
The big bridges gave me in idea but there isn't something on this map. I will make it tommorow. ^^ |
LML | | |
good to inspire ppl with my noobshit, lol;p modified by LML |
Yakkul | | |
haha LML, don't be so hard on yourself. Just think a little what you want to achieve on a map and you'll eventually get better things.
For example, if you want a map to be balanced just picture how battles would be in your map and how can one race abuse the other one. For 'concept' try to see the beauty of the map and what you wanted to achieve with it as a whole.
Despite what guys usually tell you here, you have enthusiasm in making maps, which i hope you don't lose, that's something quite lacking these days in SC.
I am not really into mapmaking (don't have the patience) but i think if you made the right path closer (more dangerous) and the right one bigger and more attracting, you could get a better feeling of the map. Also maybe removing the gas and make a min-only for the closer expa to the nat (because if not games would probably just end in the right part).
Anyway, my 2cents |
LML | | |
well...
"i think if you made the right path closer (more dangerous) and the right one bigger and more attracting,"
... ehem? ..
both right sided?! |
LML | | |
I found something to fix that shity big bridge.
Also I made the left part smaller, but the left bridge has still the same size.
And the value of the minerals at 12 and 6 are 24 (the blocks!).
I am not 100% sure if you can build a nexus/hatch/cc at 6, but I will try it asap. |
LML | | |
ok, I've just tested it, and it works:) |
LML | | |
any opinions about the map now?! .. |
LML | | |
:/ |